The cost of medical healthcare are increasing all the time. Governments are finding it difficult to balance the health care budget. Should citizens be totally responsible for their own health costs and take out private health insurance, or it is better to have a comprehensive health care system which provides free health services for all? Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is undeniable that as years went by, the prices of healthcare services are getting expensive and for some countries, their government is having a dilemma to properly allocate the nation's budget with this sector. While other people suggest that it should be every individual's responsibility to pay their medical bills by getting private health insurance, I however believe that it is the responsibility of the government to allocate a certain amount of budget to provide free healthcare to its citizens.
On the one hand, there are beneficial aspects that people can relish when getting a private health insurance. Firstly, they can choose the services that are essential and applicable for their medical needs. Secondly, once they opt for this kind of system, almost all kind of procedures and tests are free of charge and they get to choose an institution that has state-of-the-art facilities. Finally, extra fees can be refunded for some insurance company if their services were not used after few years of payment. For instance, Maxicare, which is a private health insurance in the Philippines, has a regulation that state, once fully paid for 10 years, half of what they paid will be converted to cash and still get to avail 100% of the medical services as a token of loyalty to the company.
On the other hand, there are also valuable reasons that the government should provide always the needed budget for the healthcare of its denizens. First and foremost, the taxes paid by the people should be allocated to vital sectors of the nation and one of them is for the medical services, because this will uplift the public’s whole being that they are given importance by the government. Moreover, citizens not only give away their hard earn money to help the government to build infrastructures and other facilities for the people but also to consider to aid the health care system, as it will benefit the citizens to become more productive, and can easily seek medical attention when needed the most. Last but not least, the poverty-stricken sector of the community will enormously benefit with this free of charge services. To exemplify, the president of the Philippines signed a memorandum that a free healthcare to all can be applied not only for taxpayers but also to the oppressed group of the nation where in they can be admitted without paying in institutions that are funded by the government.
In conclusion, getting health care insurance can be beneficial especially for people who can afford to purchase it, however, the government should take into consideration that not all citizens can afford to pay for it, therefore, it is still their responsibility to provide free healthcare to the people.
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...and for some countries, their government is having a dilemma to properly allocate...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
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... people suggest that it should be every individuals responsibility to pay their medical bil...
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'provide'.
Suggestion: always provide
...able reasons that the government should provide always the needed budget for the healthcare of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2274.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 452.0 315.596192385 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03097345133 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86571301178 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.455752212389 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 715.5 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.3119992771 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 174.923076923 106.682146367 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.7692307692 20.7667163134 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3846153846 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292058074289 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113789719613 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708305355326 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206961479611 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344120590368 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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