As countries develop, more and more people buy and use their own cars. Does the advantage of this for individuals outweigh the disadvantage for the environment?
In the era of nations prospering, there is an increase in a great number of individuals buying cars for transportation. While there are some controversial issues about the two sides of using cars, I would argue that the drawbacks to the habitat outweigh the benefits.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why people have a tendency to possess their own cars. Firstly, it is indisputable that purchasing automobiles will make individuals feel more confident and it is also considered a fantastic way to demonstrate the wealth and social position of a person. For example, people nowadays are more inclined to appreciate others depending on their appearance and valuable items that they possess. This means that we might be extremely luxurious and elegant in others' eyes if we are capable of purchasing a car. Moreover, in comparison with motorcycles or bicycles, automobiles make us feel comfortable and convenient when transfering, especially in the tropical monsoon rain or scorching hot days.
On the other hand, I would assert that the whole community is confronted with a variety of tremendous devastating effects due to a significant rise in the number of cars. In the aspect of transportation, utilizing automobiles creates a considerable amount of emissions such as dust, gasoline, or even air and noise pollution. According to the Ministry of Transportation in Vietnam, the average emission of carbon dioxide released into the atmosphere due to vehicles, especially cars, is roughly 4,2 million tons per year. This leads to the poorer quality of the environment, numerous alarming issues such as global warming, greenhouse gas, climate change, which directly affect people's health, respiratory diseases such as asthma, flu, etc.
In conclusion, while it is beneficial for residents when they possess a car to some extent, I also believe that the disadvantages to the environment are more significant.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33881578947 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13561044954 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615131578947 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.1650345254 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.25 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247121355673 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779536645077 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778692263311 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14926842393 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755441624553 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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