In recent times one of the most debated issues relates to freedom of creative artists. Some people assert that the government should always give privilege to creative artists in context to express their ideas in whichever way they like. However, I strongly believe that the government should allow them to show their ideas in such a manner, that the emotions and values of the society should not affect.
Bolstering my view, I would like to highlight my reasons as follow. Firstly, Creativity is the source of arts. Many creative artists have bestowed us the number of significant ideas in form of pictures, cartoons, music, and films. To exemplify it, many creative artists like Leonardo da Vinci had first drawn the design of an aeroplane, but at that time nobody could think that human can fly and everybody thought it was just imaged of his mind. Although it required a long time, it became true that human now can fly.
However, the alternative argument is that their ideas should not affect the culture and values of society. To elaborate, most of the people around the world believe in the God. So, the artist should not create such type of creation which hurts the religion. Further, the artists should not go against the culture or costume of a country. To illustrate, recently in India, a film called "Padmavat" was released and it had presented certain ideas and thoughts which were against the culture of Rajput's. So, the Central Board of Film Certification cut that shot from the film. In this type of aspect, the government could limit the practice of artists.
To conclude, I would once again clarify that Governments should grant permission to present their art, but in certain fields, the government should form some regulatory department to examine the work of artists before publishing it in front of the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98058252427 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63591786014 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559870550162 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7372326553 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1875 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3125 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248000973652 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075169525903 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725168674341 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150568135142 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077552988942 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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