Offense among young generation seems to be increasing in the majority of countries all around the world. The origins of this situations seem to stem from two factors, while several remedies appear to be open to us.
Perhaps the major factor here is the family poverty, meaning that the lack of a certain item pushes a child to commit a crime, which is derived from envy. These range from a straightforward robbery to a cruel murder, where a young person tends to overcome poverty and follow near life tendencies. For instance, in the Uk, the number of mobile phone stealings has been icreased rapidly in recent times, which is a paramount issue in society today. Another cause is the negative impact of social media and the internet, where many children are tend to commit a crime due to devious and creative criminals, who aspire to appeal young generation for such situations. This pattern appears to be global with the result that young people in many countris are almost addicted by the Internet, which is the integral part of a modern world.
Turning to possible solutions, an obvious step would be to ensure a financial assistance from the government to low-income families. Although public budgets are under pressure these days, if we had taken this action before, it would have prevented theft among youngsters. A second remedy might be to prohibit undesirable social medias observing then by the authorities. If such social meadias were less available, it would reduce the issue of the psychological influence from criminals. Finally, children should consider being aware about the negative impact of the internet from their parents.
In conclusion, the factors of the impact of social medias and family povery seem to be the main causes. A coordinated response by the state and parents may well lessen the severity of the situation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...es all around the world. The origins of this situations seem to stem from two factor...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
...d the internet, where many children are tend to commit a crime due to devious and cr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, may, second, so, then, well, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0325732899 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64019726504 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609120521173 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3744040998 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.357142857 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224533593417 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732107636101 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618202440263 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132786591567 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602126486426 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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