In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.
In the modern world, older people have a longer life than in the past, which is reflected by increasing life expectancy. However, recently, it's become a big deal that affects both individuals and society, leading to workforce shortage and increasing social services. Therefore, some measures should be allowed to reduce ageing populations influences.
Although increasing lifespan is what human initial expect, nowaday, their impact on our society is noticeable. Workforce and social services are areas that have substantial changes. For example, in industry-developed countries, the lack of young employee become more serious, the foreign workforce from developing countries plays an important role to maintain the product manufacture. Even the retired people have to do some easy work such as garbage gathering or office work, etc. Besides, raising lifetime results in rising services for older people like insurance fees, nursing home, retired salary, etc, which may become social burdens.
Rising life expectancy is a human achievement, whereas that impact is considerable, so the government should give some solutions to decrease its worse influences. Encouragement on giving birth should be taken into consideration to balance the workforce. In addition, we'd better give more opportunities to oversea students and employees who want to work abroad. The government also support social assistance in financial issues and help older inhabitant how to live an independent life.
The human lifespan is longer in modern life, leading to a significant impact on society, particularly on workforce and social services. Some measures to resolve those problems should be allowed properly by the government as well as social agreement.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 267, Rule ID: WED_WE_D[1]
Message: Did you mean 'we'd'?
Suggestion: we'd
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, whereas, for example, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67692307692 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9906560599 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2318028525 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.428571429 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243948638112 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078747657434 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677482520934 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144349299166 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519028690212 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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