the development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally.
what are advantages and disadvantages?
The burgeoning of tourism which leads to the essence of English as a marked milestone. Therefore, many people argue that based on the vital role of this language, it may become the only unique language in the world while I partly believe that the drawbacks of English outweigh the benefits in many circumstances.
Turning to the main advantages of the argument, there are two sides of English that bring benefits to human-being. First of all, if this language become popular in the world, it pave the way for people can communicate to each other more easily. As a result, the relationship between indigenous residents and overseas residents is strengthened. Secondly, many countries witness the increase of income in many fields such as tourism, transport and so on due to the advent of English. For instance, multinational companies will have more opportunities in order to find out their potential partners in comparison with when they do not have a common language to contact with each other.
On the other hand, besides the advantages of the monopoly of English, there still some disadvantages that affect to mankind. For example, indigenous resident will be at risk because their own language promote for their cultural identity and the disappearance of it may leads to many issues. According to the analysis of many linguists, they concretely prove that in spite of the benefits of English language, it still has dark side which receive criticism such as there is no longer the traditional identity of any countries. In addition, if everyone can use a common language, the overseas people will travel more often. Therefore, it may pose a threat to country security. For instance, foreign people commit crimes in other countries, the government will be hard to catch them.
To conclude, people can not deny that the development of English is so crucial while I strongly believe that keep our own language is an important thing as well as for the sake of indigenous resident.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 178, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'paves'?
Suggestion: paves
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, well, while, as for, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03343465046 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84181362762 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528875379939 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7868525776 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.285714286 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.5 7.06120827912 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301185285887 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950950569543 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643065296578 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188844812234 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053229725465 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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