A highly controversial issue today relates to whether educators should be responsible for maintaining discipline or this is the duty of parents. I am going to examine this question from both points of view and then explain why I believe that guardian and tutors both should be liable to guide students to stay disciplined.
There are people who argue that teachers must be responsible to develop disciplinary measures for the students and should assure that whether they are following them or not. The main reason for believing this that, nowadays, children spend about 8 to 9 hours in the classroom, therefore, educators should keep a check on the student's behaviour that they are treating well with their peers, doing their academic tasks on given time period. The second reason is that school tutors can guide pupils and direct them in a more appropriate fashion to achieve a task, for example when a teacher sees that students are polluting the decorum of the class during an essential topic explanation then the educator randomly selects one student and ask him to explain the particular topic which was just being explained by the teacher, this kind of action from teachers create fear in other students to behave properly during lectures.
On the other hand, since a baby starts understanding things the parent duty gets started to nurture their offspring and build great deportment as well as rich ethical and moral values because these are the most auspicious assets for a child to be a well-disciplined member of this global community without it life is not worth living. Besides, this mother's and father's another duty is to watch over or guard carefully to their infants due to the fact that in the beginning age children's mind is too vulnerable, at this particular time they require proper guidance from their parent's side, and if they are not guided properly they may become a burden for society.
In conclusion, I personally believe that a child can be more disciplined if teachers and parents work collaboratively to develop moral and ethical values in them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...e, educators should keep a check on the students behaviour that they are treating well w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, may, second, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00288184438 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69199437378 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585014409222 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.969811198 49.4020404114 223% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 217.0 106.682146367 203% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.375 20.7667163134 209% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.875 7.06120827912 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197320095823 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960583805981 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374042728893 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128729835905 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286194466873 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.8 13.0946893788 182% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.29 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.61 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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