Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of working from home.
Whether or not telecommuting is salubrious has always been an unsolved quandary. Many believe that it should prevent lots of wasted time. On the flip side, some say it has far more drawbacks. In this essay, both sides of the argument will be discussed and followed up in my opinion.
It is often suggested that working from home is meritorious for two main reasons, the first of which can prevent lots of time from being wasted in traffic every day. Traffic, that ghastly phenomenon, can kill your precious time and bring down your energy, which needs to better your career. If this problem solves, undeniably the level of works will dramatically increase. Secondly, working in a calm atmosphere, such as home, can be very healthy in psychology and the environment. As an illustration, telecommuting will reduce fuel usage and can make your actions better and better. Another advantage belonging to this is that the reduction in fuel usage will entail a healthier ecosystem, which is everyone's need.
What one should take into account is the harmful impact of telecommuting on our financial system. First and foremost, not being in a working situation causes a dip in your work effectiveness. It can bring up many dreadful impacts on companies. Workers may have more disruptions at home, resulting in reduced productivity.
In the second place, The employee has less personal contact with managers, bosses, and colleagues. It can bring many barriers, such as finding solutions to fast or depression caused by a lack of communication with work friends. Moreover, they will not be able to keep abreast of the latest events which happen inside the company. Most of the employers wonder how they get along with this new method of work.
By way of a conclusion, even though it is true that some specific groups of community prevalently hold the position of telecommuting, but it can be stated that the pros of using home office are more than their cons. Nevertheless, the question is: Can it improve the health and happiness of humankind in general? Only time will tell us, but in the meantime, working from home will continue to influence every aspect of our everyday lives, some of which necessitate more comprehension.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Whether” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'Whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: Whether
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, in general, such as, in my opinion, it is true, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1850.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98652291105 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83249553014 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584905660377 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6574333277 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0952380952 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38095238095 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202115859848 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050561489315 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602976768493 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977007216833 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470107931537 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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