Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Compared to the few decades, parents nowadays are much more concerned to their children’s development and education. There are some factors causing this phenomenon, one of them is the higher level of the parents’ education.
In my time, about 30 years ago, everything seemed so hard. I used to struggle by myself. I do believe that it did not only happen to me but also to most children in my age. In contrast, children are now found to be very taken care by their parents, especially about education. They bring their children to the best and most expensive school they can afford. Besides, they also give some additional course for their kids as early as possible. They have English or other foreign language course, sport course, or even life skill course. Other than that, some parents also invite teachers to teach in their house. Those examples may take place to the rich family. How about other who live simply? Yes, they still care much on their kids’ education. Besides trying to find the cheaper course, they also try to teach their kids the best. The only reason is all about competition.
When I was a kid, my parents only thought about money, works, food, and house. They always asked us, their children, to be autonomous, to be independent. In addition to the less nutritious food intake, they used to ask us to help them to finish their jobs. Instead of helping doing our homework, they never asked about the lesson we had or the activities we did at school. With this condition, however, we feel that we are better in terms of our mental. Therefore, we could enroll to higher new level of education by ourselves without being accompanied by parents.
To sum up, it is true that in present times, parents seem much more attentive to their children in term of education. Nevertheless, it does not mean that they could be better in their mental development.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to do' or 'do'.
Suggestion: to do; do
...o finish their jobs. Instead of helping doing our homework, they never asked about th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, in addition, in contrast, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 24.0651302605 216% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78287461774 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57125629588 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587155963303 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 5.43587174349 313% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.2650442982 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.0 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2173913043 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26086956522 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184238892225 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054459156755 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478943017375 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130333391303 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329814493988 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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