Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In recent day, due to the rapid movement of globalization, the world has being flattened. In order to create our desired community, an international language which is English has been spoken all around the world. However, human beings are witnessing a unsought phenomenon of the languages' loss. Although some people think that the extinction of some languages is not a serious problem, I do believe that the diversity of the world languages has a lot of benefits for the individual and the society as well.
On the one hand, We can never deny others, who believe that studying several languages are stressful and difficult. The hieroglyphs of ancient Egyptians carving on the pyramid, for example, is still a mystery for archaeologist which they are not able to understand exhaustively for ages. Less time and efforts spend on studying languages, therefore, could encourage people to focus on the major and improve practical skills for superior performance.
However, on the other hand, languages has precious value to our societies. Languages contain culture of every nations and ethnicity as well as are regarded as the indicator for the past the human had been to in centuries. As an example, civilization in Egypt is born because of language and communication. During the War in 1945, Vietnamese poets had a motto: When Vietnamese still last, Vietnam still last. Language cannot be easily taken from other countries because of its historical significance. It emphasizes that fact that Languages are more than a ways of communication, they are the identification and the pride of each nation's citizens. People should not be encapsulated in a limited language.
To conclude, other people consider studying fewer languages as the uncomplicated task; however certain languages resemble historical value and should be given importance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...l value and should be given importance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, therefore, well, for example, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23333333333 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94710796591 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560606060606 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5681893051 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9444444444 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61111111111 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.470908593901 0.244688304435 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148095012726 0.084324248473 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154572493743 0.0667982634062 231% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.290893534907 0.151304729494 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.227871953744 0.056905535591 400% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.