Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
There are numerous languages which are spoken daily around the world. However, some of them disappear every year, which leads to an easier life since there are fewer languages exist. In my opinion, I strongly agree with that opinion.
There are two main reasons why the disappearance of some languages is not important; otherwise, it helps people to have an easier life. In terms of international communication, immigrants and people who study or work overseas will be more comfortable when communicating. They are not prone to the misunderstanding because of language barriers, especially in rural areas. Moreover, the fact the several languages die out annually also contributes to the formation of the main language used widely around the world, which is particularly useful for traveling and commercial purposes.
From a country’s perspective, the extinction of some languages helps the government to unite their people. For example, in Indonesia, there are nearly thousands of languages, which causes numerous difficulties for the authority to communicate and enact legislation as well. Additionally, children are not compelled to study both local and the country’s language. Therefore, they are not subject to being confused when using languages.
However, there is no denying that the disappearance of some ethical languages afflicts to the diversity of language usage and the culture of that language as well. Although the cultural values are influenced, there are other changes in the current languages spoken which also take part in the diversity of languages. In fact, there are a lot of differences in the way people from different areas use languages like their pronunciation, “slang”, idiom or also grammar structure. Therefore, to study and preserve the above changes also contributes greatly in forming a new culture and tradition of languages.
In conclusion, the disappearance of some languages which are not used widely helps people have better and simpler lives. Governments and organizations should protect the number of ones which are generally spoken in order to preserve the diverse languages currently exist.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1838.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5696969697 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18063470054 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527272727273 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.353026925 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.117647059 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4117647059 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17647058824 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269343258115 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897822299901 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648883625739 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162484179282 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0922395043929 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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