Families who send their children to private school should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
Some people assume that children receiving education from non-public teaching institutions have their parents are in no need of bearing social charges via taxes. I personally do not support this prospect.
To begin with, the lack of balance regarding finance between the richer and the poorer could result from letting wealthy families get rid of taxes payments. Both richer class and less wealthy class have their own choices of sending their kids to private schools or public ones owning to their particular attainments and affordable budget so it seems to have no reasons for being in a favor of any sides. If there was a situation in which only poorer families, were liable to shoulder entire taxes for education system within nation, these families would get worse financial issue. In addition, most people are still pay a fortune for some social facilities which they do not often use such as fire-brigade, insurance or the police. So these wealthy families do not really have satisfactory reasons to deny taking accounts for taxes providing educational system.
I would suppose people should be willing to take shared responsibility in terms of educational affair that benefit slur own country in particular. It would bring better-organized and more efficient studying and teaching process. Young people would perhaps take advantages of studying and job opportunities equally no matter which living conditions they are in. Also, with sufficient and adequate fund, well-qualified teaching workforce inevitably will be resulted from good provide. After all, students will probably the people luckily possessing education yield, and they are likely capable of being more productive staff for future workplace they intend to apply for future job.
To sum up, taxes for corroborating education should be a part engaged in families whose their children study at private schools.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, regarding, so, still, well, after all, in addition, in particular, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38175675676 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7549324084 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628378378378 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4079068313 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.538461538 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233540618842 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841378717485 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062509059038 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154270609546 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622491601096 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.