Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general.
In today's world we spend most of our time as adults either on work or on household activities. We hardly spend any time on our hobbies due to our busy lifestyles.
Hobbies are essentially activities that gives us peace of mind, motivation and stimulate's our creative side. Hobby could be anything from playing a sport or cooking or any art work like painting, craft work, dancing or even as simple as listening music or reading. Doing an activity that take's you away from your stress is a hobby.
There are a number of reasons for people not giving enough time to such activities. One of t...
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activities that gives us peace of mind
activities that give us the peace of mind
This inturn help's in having a healthy mind
This in turn helps in having a healthy mind
as it not only help's an individual, but also help's people
as it not only helps an individual, but also helps people
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Sentence: As discussed earlier, hobbies help us destress and relax.
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Sentence: This inturn help's in having a healthy mind.
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