Every human being needs a considerable amount of multifarious types of nutrients in their meals, so folks these days expect a variety of food or ingredients to attain an ideal diet. Each of the variety in groceries expected by the public require unique conditions to be produced not common to any land, therefor the journey of the food from the farm to our folks becomes relatively long. Some believe that it would be better if the citizenry is dependent on the local goods. Here I would like to list out the advantages and disadvantages of global circulation of edible goods.
To begin with, there are myriad advantages of importing and exporting soft commodities few of them are, firstly technology is flourishing by leaps and bounds so this effects ones diet directly as anything from around the globe can reach you irrespective of your location by the internet. secondly, the masses get to choose from a variety of ingredients in order to widen their cuisine, For example, if a person is settled abroad for a certain purpose and desires to have a supper which belongs to immigrant's native, the foreigner can simply order the ingredients online to initiate the preparation of the meal. furthermore, In few parts of the world there are countries with extreme weather conditions and infertile lands incapable of producing most of the essential ingredients required for an ideal meal, for such countries it becomes mandatory for them to constantly import the integrals of food in order to maintain plum health of their citizens.
on the other hand, considering the advantages of self dependence of country for its own food, Firstly, it is very good for the government if the public depends on the local goods as it consistently hikes the countries economy and the country wont be dependent on its allies or neighbors during war or a natural calamity. Secondly, Masses consume healthy and fresh food when its locally produced as the distance from the source to table is less time consuming. moreover few ingredients like meat and dairy products should be frozen in order to transport it to places, hence it losses most of its nutrients when froze, reheated and cooked.
to conclude, there are certain advantages of depending upon local goods where the public gets reasonable, fresh food ingredients but they do not outweigh the advantages of international circulation of food as hunger cannot be considered as a national problem and instead it should be accounted as a global problem because there are many people across the globe living on a sterile land and totally depending on international goods for food.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2177.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 436.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99311926606 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79941598602 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538990825688 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 686.7 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.481076559 49.4020404114 218% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 197.909090909 106.682146367 186% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.6363636364 20.7667163134 191% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0909090909 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234260639479 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093037278723 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646582878393 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148411197892 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684941958 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.9 13.0946893788 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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