Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what
extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people argue that foreigners should pay more than local citizen while visiting to museum or any other tourist place. I don't agree with this statement, because I think every should pay same amount of fee.
Foreigner already improving economy by their tourism activities so imposing extra fees would be too harsh on them. Many countries for instance Brazil, France thanks many other European Nation have high number of tourists. tourism activities benefit in these countries by many aspect. If a country impose extra fees on tourist they will be discouraged to visit those country as a result The Tourist Industry will collapse.
The opposite people argue that Global Citizen already paying taxes so that they should not need to pay for enjoying those monuments. The minutiae of imposing extra fees would be an equitable and it would have a negative impact on tourism industry. It is the responsibility of particular country that they would keep up their traditional culture and their heritage.
In conclusion,I would like to reiterate my opinion that, tourists should not carry the extra fees of tourist attraction.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...r enjoying those monuments. The minutiae of imposing extra fees would be an equit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 182.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23626373626 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55657516236 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626373626374 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.2790977252 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.3 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12519206321 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535517492958 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616297541375 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.087549398116 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761430664708 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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