In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Whether people read online instead of printed newspapers or books is still being
discussed on many forums in the world. Therefore, it becomes a topic of an
important issue. This essay aims at providing evidence that supports the statement.
First of all, more and more E-books are published with no cost. Readers can easily
access a website, click on a random book and read it. Moreover, some books can
be downloaded, so readers can read them both online and offline. In addition to
that, people who love reading a lot but are lack of money can use e-books to fulfill
their passions.
Second, a device consists of plenty of books. This is an advantage for anyone who
travels often. For instance, three books not only take much space but also are
heavy and may cause inconvenience. On the other hand, one can simply bring a mobile phone
which contains the same number of books without changing the weight of the bag.
Last but not least, both e-newspapers and e-books contribute to protecting the
environment and humans. Since people read them online, fewer trees are cut to
produce papers. In addition to that, trees can help us filter the atmosphere and
decrease air pollution. Besides, the materials of the newspaper are harmful for
people’s health, so if they are not produced anymore, effects on people will be
decreased.
In conclusion, online reading brings a lot of benefits for our lives. Hopefully, in the
future, more people will tend to use devices to read books and newspapers.
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... both online and offline. In addition to that, people who love reading a lot but ...
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...lack of money can use e-books to fulfill their passions. Second, a device cons...
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...oks. This is an advantage for anyone who travels often. For instance, three books...
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...ks not only take much space but also are heavy and may cause inconvenience. On th...
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...and, one can simply bring a mobile phone which contains the same number of books ...
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...and e-books contribute to protecting the environment and humans. Since people rea...
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...read them online, fewer trees are cut to produce papers. In addition to that, tre...
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...es can help us filter the atmosphere and decrease air pollution. Besides, the mat...
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...terials of the newspaper are harmful for people’s health, so if they are not prod...
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...duced anymore, effects on people will be decreased. In conclusion, online read...
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...enefits for our lives. Hopefully, in the future, more people will tend to use dev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03137254902 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53994160265 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623529411765 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8560560531 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4705882353 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76470588235 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.38176352705 411% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210355160066 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607542082768 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477944576423 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0636424733802 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537041578997 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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