In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with that statement?
In the upcoming days, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read through online without paying. I strongly agree to the above statement. As the technology is getting improved the people are also getting advanced.
Long back, when there was no technology people used to buy printed newspapers , books or even sometimes they used to get the information from the radio. The people had to pay for the newspapers and books. The prices of the books varies in the shops. There was a time where people had to wait for the newspaper to arrive at. Adding to it, prices used to change monthly. It was such a onerous task for the newspaper man to distribute the newspapers in each and every home.
Although , the printed books have it's own advantages for the beginners to read but now the time has changed. All are preferring to the online mode. Moreover, because of this people can just read the books or newspapers wherever they want. They can carry it with them in their mobile phone rather than holding it in their hands or by putting them in the bag. There are some websites which provide free access to books and newspapers but in contrast to it, we also find the websites which later demand to pay. Most of the websites have limited to access the functions for free, but after some period of time they ask the people to pay. I find this as an awful thing because I say everyone should access to everything on this earth. Even if it is the poor or the rich person. There are business startegies for each and everything in this era. For instance, lets assume a person who is quite busy with his office work. Although he earns well, but has no time to read the daily news. So, he listens the news on his phone while having his breakfast or on his way to the office. This makes him to do he works simultaneously without any hustles. Besides, this the major point is that we need not pay when we listen the news online except for some websites which as for money. Most of the people think that it will save money for them. Already because of pandemic the situation has become more worse outside, so now the folks are reading the newspapers and books in the online mode.
I would conclude saying that I strongly agree the thesis statement saying that in the future , people will start choosing the online reading rather than buying the newspapers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, so, well, while, as for, even so, except for, for instance, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1944.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 430.0 315.596192385 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52093023256 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27745712574 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483720930233 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4072200756 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.7692307692 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5384615385 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.65384615385 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334793834233 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837199489883 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104791156852 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236034674687 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11652242232 0.056905535591 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.56 8.58950901804 76% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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