The gap between the rich and the poor is becoming wider; the rich are becoming richer, and the poor are getting even poorer. What problems can the situation cause? What can be done to reduce this gap?
It is believed that economic imbalance between the affluent and the underprivileged is greatly widening. Such income inequality could cause several problems, and the measures should be identified to address this issue.
It is possibly said that there are two major reasons for this disparity. The first cause is that residents are not able to access to higher education, as a result, the labors are insufficient qualifications as well as experience to get a well-paid job. Particularly, it is an ongoing problem that the small amount salary of unskilled workers are unlike to meet their daily demand. The second reason is that as the poor cannot afford to better healthcare services such as vaccination or fine treatment, they might easily contract some infectious diseases including malaria or flu. Therefore, the public health of one country would deteriorate if dwellers were living in extreme poverty.
To tackle these worrying concerns the authority should have better strategies to minimize the discrepancy between the wealthy people and lower classes. Firstly,
Higher taxes should be imposed on the rich that could mitigate the income inequality. Additionally, this large amount money can be used for providing free food or building more public houses for the lowest income workers. Secondly, the government should create great opportunities for residents, which not only reduces poverty, but also improves greatly living standards of citizens. Finally, public health should be taken into consideration by reducing hospital fees and implementing community immunization against contagious diseases.
In conclusion, education and health shortage are two severe repercussions of the unequal distribution of wealth. Also, the government could levy heavy taxes on the rich and enhance education along with community health for the poor.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61428571429 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9075552533 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653571428571 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2725295776 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.285714286 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136273990166 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0405315141159 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286691136504 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0647353836813 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255433267203 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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