Genetic engineering is an important issue in modern society. Some people think that it will improve people's lives in many ways, others feel that it may be a threat to life itself on earth. How do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Mankind has evolved into a new era. With the advent of biotechnology and genetic engineering, Altering the fundamental chemistry to bring out desired traits has become a reality. Some people opine that this will flourish human race, while others are in denial with our tampering with mother nature. This essay will discuss about the potential advantages of this newfound technology, which overthrow the disadvantages considerably.
Evidently, Genetic manipulation of natural DNA has been a concept , which has been extensively brainstormed for almost a century. The basics of cellular structure and their control by genes, has been thoroughly described for many organisms, essentially opening the doors for hybrid revolution. The core concepts include, switching naturally unfavourable characters of a poorly adapted organism with a well-adapted one. For instance, Genetically modified organism(GMO) crops are on the rise in united states, providing farmers with better yields, drought resistant and pest resistant produce. Obviously, some are concerned that this playing god with the creation, will bring unforeseen disasters.
On a further note, Human beings have been at a constant war with certain untreatable health conditions, which might be uprooted with latest technologies. Many incurable congenital diseases like autism and down’s syndrome strongly attribute their origins to one’s genetic makeover. On the other hand, Cancer is a disturbingly horrendous health condition with no real cure, again involving the same culprit. Recent advances of gene editing tools are the hope against these unsolvable cases. To quote an example, brand new discovery of CRISPR-Cas 9 enzyme enables scientists to preferentially choose any site on our DNA and snip it, removing those responsible for above conditions. It can be substantially argued that these benefits will improve life expectancy and might be the only available answer to inherited disabilities.
To summarise, our civilization certainly depends on scientific advances to guarantee our sustenance over those previous extinct life forms, and provide humanity with tools to conquer many forthcoming natural challenges.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.815625 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03889570137 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6875 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.973886501 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.3125 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5625 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130572239867 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387946780024 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357106258876 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0740965574826 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340406993514 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.48 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.14 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 78.4519038076 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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