In the last decade, global warming has been an increasingly worrying issue. What could be the aetiologies of it and what steps could be taken by governments and individuals to address the problems? In this essay, I will present some important causes and propose some solutions.
One of the most important factors for global warming is pollution from vehicles emissions. Nowadays, most cities are overrun by old qualities vehicles. Therefore, government should ban all derelict vehicles so that not only green house gasses like carbon dioxide, soulfur dioxide and so on emissions could be alleviated but also health problems like asthma and chronic obstructive pulmonary disease could be prevented. An individual could go on foot or use bicycle instead of using car which would strengthen his physique.
Another major culprit is the excessive use of fossil fuels like coal, gas and so on for the generation of electricity. Government could encourage the oraganizations, factories and companies to choose alternative forms of energy like renewable energy. That is to say, factories could use solar, wind or nuclear energy to produce electricity. The government should subsidise all those companies in order to mitigate the global warming. Besides government, every individual should turn off their computer, television, etc after using them. They could use effective bulbs to conserve energy.
Last but not least, another driving factor is deforestation. In other words, people are clearing forests for housing and livestock grazing. Therefore, we are depriving the sources( forests) to absorb greenhouse gas like carbon dioxide. The way forward might be to plant trees by every individual in order to counteract the excessive rate of cuttings of trees. Also government must impose heavy fines and even long term imprisonment for people who are involved in clearing of forests for their personal benefits.
All in all, global warming is a ubiquitous issue due to commonly use of non renewable energy, old infrastructures and so on. However, the problems could be solved if every individual and government worked in harmony.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, then, therefore, in other words, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1799.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4024024024 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87067925027 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591591591592 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0158583168 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.95 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.65 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164668371677 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513295119766 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619422733169 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101723711738 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416318879893 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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