The government's investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Since the formation of the very first states the issue has been acute in the choice the relevant allocation of the budget. An opinion exists, that the resources which the officials spend on culture is irrelevant and they should be redirected to the infrastructure. Although I believe that the culture is important urban infrastructure plays a huge role in modernity.
In the 21st century, due to the development of megacities the need for huge contributions is felt constant assistance from local authorities and constant assistance from local authorities. Every year the number of residential buildings and the length of engineering communications increase as well as many social services that help people appear. The city requires constant budget replenishment as issues arise in supplying the city with materials and highly qualified specialists. For example, my friend Francesco, who works for the City Urbanization Company, always tells me about the problems with their foundation. Hence, In the modern world much money is spent on improving the state of social services and urban development.
Moreover, it should be noted that the cultural state of people plays an important role in the development of a country. Part of the formation of great powers is the history of the high political growth of the masses. Since time immemorial, the hallmark of states that have left their mark on the world culture has been achievements of spirituality. For instance, Italy surprising with its a rich cultural heritage gives both its citizens and tourists aesthetic pleasure and this itself justifies financing into the spiritual world. Thus, the personification of the country and its power is success in world culture and achievements in art.
To conclude, It is impossible to unequivocally answer the question of where the state should invest money, but both spirituality and infrastructure need financing. As humanity enters a new era the government should pay more attention to urban issues but not forget about creation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.334375 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07122322689 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56875 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.3653471058 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 113.8 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0986691324516 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0303852657085 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032083183557 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0622492769338 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485406334035 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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