Governments should spend more money on railways rather than roads.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Essay topics:

Governments should spend more money on railways rather than roads.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

people who rule the nation should be using the money for increasing the railway facility compare to the highway. I completely agree with this statement and explain in the coming paragraph in brief.

First of all, the human being who lives in a rural area the is easily connect with the city though to rail because of that people get a job in the city and live a good life. In addition, territory people should be travel near 50 to 300 kilometers easily and save lack of time compared to the travel to cars or bus on the highways. for example Surat to Mumbai 350 kilometer far, railway reach Surat to Mumbai in 3 hours and vehicle reach 5 hours. Moreover, billions of people are traveling to railways to one city to another city because of that number of the car are not on the road that way less fossil fuel is burned so It is good for environment.

On the other hand, railway ticket is more expensive there for all the people are not affordable. Secondly is railway run on railways timetable so rails are not available all the time and some time environment effect rail schedule for example In the monsoon seasons due to the heavy rain train are canceled. Moverever all the city and village have no railway station that way train is not available on those villages and cities for instance In India there are not all territories are connected throw rail.

In conclusion, rail has been more advantage compare to the disadvantage that way I agreed to this statement Authority should have been used more money to develop railways rather than to highways.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
people who rule the nation should be using the...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in the coming paragraph in brief. First of all, the human being who lives ...
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Line 4, column 74, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'connected'.
Suggestion: connected
...who lives in a rural area the is easily connect with the city though to rail because of...
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Line 4, column 335, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
... travel to cars or bus on the highways. for example Surat to Mumbai 350 kilometer f...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ned so It is good for environment. On the other hand, railway ticket is mor...
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Line 7, column 130, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'railways'' or 'railway's'?
Suggestion: railways'; railway's
... affordable. Secondly is railway run on railways timetable so rails are not available al...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...itories are connected throw rail. In conclusion, rail has been more advant...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in brief, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6654676259 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42147255207 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525179856115 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.7699683198 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.7 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.9 7.06120827912 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14195202862 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064276003688 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673481440575 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115951458268 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792936497823 0.056905535591 139% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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