It is very crucial to live a happy and healthy life. Everybody wants to live a complete and healthy life. Happiness and pleasure is always difficult to explain. There are different meanings of happiness for different people. To achieve happy life everyone has to work hard. There are a lot of factors which can enhance happy life. This essay will explain meanings of happiness in different aspects and will indicate different contributing factors to live happy life.
It is always difficult to explain what happiness is. Some people think that living a lavish lifestyle is an ultimate goal of life. For them they are happy if they live in a big house , drive a latest and expensive car ,and can spend their free time in leisure activities whenever they want. It is very important for them to achieve their goal. On the other hand some people think that happiness changes with different life phases. In childhood getting a favorite toy is joyful for them. Adult life happiness is to achieve their carrier goals . As they get old, good health is most satisfying for them. So it is not easy to explain happiness. It is more subjective feeling .It is emotional and situational event.
Although there are different meaning of happiness for different people, there are certain factors which are important to achieve their goals. One of major influencing factor is hard work and being focused. To reach any target everyone has to work hard and look forward for it. For example if someone wants to live a luxury life , he has to study hard and choose a good carrier to earn reasonable money. Another important factor is to accept that life has different uphills and downhills. Every body has different turns in life. Some days are worse then others. It is important to realise that everybody face these hardships in life. But the good thing is that life goes on. Successes are together with failures. So it is important to face these facts and enjoy the time whatever they have. It is important to try again and not to give up.
In conclusion it is very important to enjoy life with all aspects. Staying healthy and satisfying is important at individual level as well as globally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, then, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 13.1623246493 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1799.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78457446809 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48661946478 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476063829787 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 16.0721442886 193% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9547015555 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.0322580645 106.682146367 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.1290322581 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.35483870968 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 27.0 8.67935871743 311% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401497114917 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113309243235 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.09357618227 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256707946205 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519572883886 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 13.0946893788 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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