Having a steady job is better than changing jobs frequently
It is known that, majority of people want to get an occupation early and resist doing it successfully. Nevertheless, we always run into the people who have no steady jobs.
First and foremost, today’s modern life has a common phrase which is “ good profession is good lifestyle “.As we all know, world population are swelling dramatically that is why obtaining a satisfied work and continuing it is extremely indispensible for per contemporary people. Youths who have a University education run into some problems to find a fulfilled vocation. A great deal of people admitted that employees who have been worked on a job without any alternations is better than altering their profession and live under the difficult acts. Furthermore, working only steady vocation has a lot of amenities. Firstly, keep doing only one job is the best way to achieve a good career rather than unsteady job. Secondly, if the person works merely on one job, he will be master in this profession. Additionally, he never struggle during his working. Finally, someone who is employee does not worry about being idle and lives successfully.
On the other hand, there are myriad jobless people in our modern life and they live poor condition but they are not guilty for living like that. We have some reasons to explain why they are living under the difficult condition. Firstly, companies’ bankrupting leads to workers’ to lose their profession. Secondly some workers cannot get on well with their counterparts. Finally, master and who work in high position employees are given the sack and become idle and some people go in prison because their boss do trouble and all crime are put on workers’ body.
In conclusion, there are numerous causes becoming idle, however, people who want to achieve a good career they must try to keep on moving only one way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: struggles
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05519480519 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86194070302 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603896103896 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1956072259 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3125 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154971434983 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052404162525 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077061759366 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076977400909 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0883806463891 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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