AN increasing number of people are buying what the need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online?
In modern times, some people want to buy a lot of products from the website online. This trend has several advantages and disadvantages for both personals and enterprises.
It can be said that buying something from website online has some noteworthy positive effects. The main advantage of online shopping is that people can order goods when they work at their office, while others have to spend lots of time at in-store shopping to choose some items. As a result, people can reduce pressure on time, and they will possibly spend more time with their family. Another advantage is that people can save money. A good example is that some online stores often give their customers a coupon or free shipping. Consequently, buyers can save a large amount of money, if they do not pay for parking fee or transportation fee
On the other hand, there are several negative aspects that should be taken into consideration. The most weakness of this trend is customers can receive some bad products from the unreliable store. For instance, some online store will update their products that have edited with lower price in order for competing with others. Therefore, some customers tend to choose products with lower price and shimmering images online which make them buying unused items.
In conclusion, it is worth considering that there are both positive aspects and weak points of people are more likely to buy more products from the online store.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03319502075 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4827914472 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551867219917 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3742762069 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.083333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0833333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179230375946 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785464025338 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508896549967 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132694380006 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560530301755 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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