An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online?

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An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online?

In modern times, the issue of online shopping has become highly controversial. There are those who say that shopping via internet has beneficial effect to people and companies however, others believe that it is detrimental for them. In this essay, I will examine the benefits and downsides of this phenomenon and provide my overall opinion.
From an overall perspective, there are two key advantages of online shopping for human and companies. Perhaps, main advantages of this trend is that we can buy everything that can important for us. A good illustration of this is that if we want to buy a special something that do not find easily to give to someone as a gift, we can do it just minutes at everywhere where have internet connection and we can gain time and not tired. A further point in favor of this is that some sellers can sold easily many products to many customer via internet. More and more people are buying famous brand by order with internet fewer people buy only local brand in theirs country.
Despite these arguments, there are also various disadvantages to online shopping. The main disadvantages is that people can purchase easily something that is not to need for them. This is because when they are searching something at internet they may come across attractive advertisements and discounts and they can buy this product without thinking in just minutes. Furthermore, some shopping websites is not accept own products that are sold. As a result, if you buy something from this you cannot refund this product that even if do not like it.
In a conclusion, it is must be said that online shopping has clear advantages and disadvantages. Taking above into account, it would be appear that there are more advantages than disadvantages between doing online shopping and do no it. If company and customer can find right balance at online shopping, these implementations will further our lives.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, so, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93498452012 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77449478559 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520123839009 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9051876294 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.625 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1875 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228066414005 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839499089625 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552183560161 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1432878439 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161872000145 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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