One major positive side of having education abroad is that people get opportunity to work abroad. While working there, people observe that the indigenous work culture there permits them to keep personal and official life separate. For instance, in Germany, people leave no stone unturned for good of their company when it is a weekday, while on weekends despite urgency of their work people are not bothered to work by the organisation. This type of environment motivates people to be part of such society where people can find equilibrium between their work and their personal life. And education is easiest way to get enrolled there.
Another advantage of this establishment is that students find that remuneration offered by employer there is more than enough to head a quality life. Being minimum wages law in place no one gets salary below this threshold in such countries. The US has set up a good example in front of world, by directing all the multinational institutions to pay immigrant students turned employees there a minimum amount of USD 100000 as their annual salary. This way thousands of Indians managed to save hefty amount for self and family in recent years.
However, money is the downside for students those who intend to pursue education in foreign. In other words, education in such countries is way to expensive and to support their tuition fees these students are forced to opt for education loan with higher rate of interests. This becomes a burden for such pupils for short term. Nevertheless, once they become part of workforce this loan amount becomes negligible for students to repay.
In conclusion, although, education loan is an issue to go abroad for higher education, I think later charismatic life make it possible for us to go through this pain. Therefore, in my opinion education overseas has more benefits
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 601, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the easiest'.
Suggestion: is the easiest
... and their personal life. And education is easiest way to get enrolled there. Another a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01607717042 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66503044614 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581993569132 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8644384529 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181667592469 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580914716705 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050811924783 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11622561836 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532527200143 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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