The internet has as many disadvantages as it does advantages. To what extent do you agree with this statement.

Internet is one of necessities these days. People can survive without eating for a day but not without internet. The internet has so many advantages as well as disadvantages which I would like to describe further.

First, If we look at the benefits of using internet ,there are many things which we can learn by using this. For example, Students who want to get deep knowledge about scientific topics can search and can achieve their goals. Second, we are now living in global era. So,we can connect with anyone worldwide within some time.

On the other hand,there are many disadvantages which we cannot ignore. It simply effects eyes of everyone. To make it more clear, To use internet one has to sit in front of computer or mobile and by sitting for long periods can effect on eyes. Also, it can be used for illegal purposes like hacking or something.

In conclusion, there are both pro as well cons of the internet. If everyone use that upto some extent can benefit them more.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, second, so, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 1615.20841683 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 173.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73988439306 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46535688359 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682080924855 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 506.74238477 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2658829152 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.0769230769 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.3076923077 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137078767313 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504827361487 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443023988606 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898449736237 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305704859399 0.056905535591 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 13.0946893788 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.32 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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