It is true that although the enormous growth in the use of the internet has alternated the way people convey and absorb information, it has also created some issues. Several problems have resulted from this tendency and they should be tackled by several effective measures from the government and individuals.
The main issue belongs to the spread of false information which affects directly the government and individuals. Nowadays, a great deal of violent content related to terrorism or social unrest or reactionary content may denigrate the authority's reputation and cause bewildering among citizens unknowingly creating opportunities for rioters and anti-state elements to disrupt people’s lives. Moreover, the lack of comprehensive knowledge about distinguishing information may have an adverse impact on individuals. For example, my friend believed in the irrational about diet and exercise and started following it; soon after she started having issues with hypotension and headache. Another negative influence resulting from the internet is the likelihood of being victims of cyber attacks by hackers. With the drawback of internet security, many personal data can be leaked which makes hackers can easily access this and commit financial fraud and steal private information.
Since such issues are serious, the government and individuals should immediately take steps to address these problems. The first problem should be implemented by the government. They must impose stricter laws to punish cyber criminals like long-term prison sentences or heavy fines, and improve their onsite IT security systems. It is also important to cénssore the veracity of internet news and ban extreme content sites from users to protect readers from misleading information. Secondly, individuals must raise their awareness about using the internet properly by avoiding spreading unverified pieces of information and believing in untrustworthy sources. For example, people can report false information to authorities through hotline numbers and means of media.
In conclusion, there are various negative consequences of the internet that can exert serious effects on people’s lives private, these can be tackled by appropriate steps by government policies and people’s awareness. Hopefully, these measures can reduce the drawback of the internet and bring people a fresh internet environment.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2044.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79036827195 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94854448241 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606232294618 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7188580294 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.75 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0625 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188345088004 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605508177023 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040903823459 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119912630187 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.017767838701 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.3 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.5 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.