It is true that there has been a transformation in how individuals convey and acquire information since the emergence of the internet. Several unprecedented problems have resulted from this tendency and they should be tackled by a number of effective solutions from the government.
As the internet has revolutionized information exchange, several problems could be anticipated. The main issue is the spread of misleading news.This is due to the fact that this platform allows users to post any information regardless of its unclear origins. For instance, a few months ago, there were some youtube videos which attracted a large number of people’s attention, claiming that the North Korean leader Mr Kim had passed away, but in reality, he is still alive. Another problem is personal information breach. Specifically, due to poor security networks, hackers can take advantage of security holes to steal private information of internet users for illegal purposes like blackmailing.
However, I believe that information censorship and stricter legislation can mitigate aforementioned issues. Firstly, the government should pay more attention to the authenticity of information published online. Therefore, they can take prompt actions by requiring website administrators to remove false information to preclude the existence of unreliable sources of information from online platforms. Moreover, imposing tightener laws to punish cyber criminals is of paramount importance. There are various types of penalty, such as huge fines or even prison sentences. The aim of these punishments is to show high-tech criminals that their actions have negative consequences. As a result, cyber criminals will be aware of their wrongdoings and an alleviating ratio of personal data leak will be followed.
In conclusion, while disseminating and absorbing information through the internet gives rise to the prevalence of unreliable information as well as private information disclosure, these can be combated with the elimination of misinformation and introduction of sterner laws.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
... issue is the spread of misleading news.This is due to the fact that this platform a...
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Line 3, column 339, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ere some youtube videos which attracted a large number of people’s attention, claiming that the N...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 8.3376753507 312% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.7654723127 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28152899672 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631921824104 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9032707515 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5333333333 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187327031239 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627726431862 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598608309569 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117615202833 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031152109595 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.