The issue as to whether Living independently is the best choose for youngsters as soon as impossible has remained source of controversy. I hold fast to the belief with those who think that it is cynamic for college students to live far away or study abroad than live at home with their parents,I write up several reason in this situation.
Many parents alway make the best condition for college student to cover their bills or daily expenses during academic achivements on campus. But it is not popular in West-based societies, like the US or the UK. From the 18 years old, it is mandatory for youngster to start over their life without the awareness or the ingenious care of parents.This will do the wonders for themselves. Firstly, college students may have an opportunity to learnt to be independent, they will expose with knowledge-based societies as well as the enhancement of flexible actions or behaviours in all aspects of life. Furthermore, Student have to make their own decisions. When Having in a serious trouble or difficulty in daily activies, part-time job or the pressure of time and study, they will have abundant experiments and result in a real sense of responsibility for their own decisions more flexibly and maturely.
Last but not least, I think it is not less important than remained aspects. It is ingenious to take in consideration for student to take part in online platform about their expertise on campus as well as joining in extracurriculum activities such as workshops, references or lectures of prosperous businesses. By the greater demand for those activities, Teenagers will refine their thoughts and decisions in the future's career path.Also, Students also deal with problems without emotional support from family and broaden their knowledge the best day by day.
Due to aforementioned argument, I completely contend with the notion that Living independently will get better than Living at finacially dependent on parent's payment. And there has a undeniable fact that it is a better decision for college students to gain more knowledge and receive life lessons for a better life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e at home with their parents,I write up several reason in this situation. Many parents alwa...
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...e up several reason in this situation. Many parents alway make the best conditi...
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...reness or the ingenious care of parents.This will do the wonders for themselves. Fir...
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...nd decisions in the futures career path.Also, Students also deal with problems witho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, well, as to, i think, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10662824207 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98325323244 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567723342939 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.7212866071 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.307692308 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6923076923 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391494074336 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12172545844 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104167766476 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2441430526 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103821110497 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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