IT is generally believed that the internet is an excellent means of communication, but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In today’s world the internet is an essential requirement of day to day life. Although many people think that it is one of the most efficient way to communicate with people, it is considered by others that the internet is not the best possible option to get information. In my opinion, I believe that communication through internet is a blessing of modern science as it is fast and more advanced than any other means.
On the one hand, some people completely relay on internet to contact with their friends, family and relatives and what no and I agree with this side of discussion. Life without internet is unthinkable in this current world. The internet is very fast and effective means of connecting people from all over the world. For instances, due to the advancement of internet we can talk to someone face to face using some apps, can share our views and ideas through e-mail or various websites immediately at the moment we think. Before this service, it was only either letters, telephone or telegraph which were sometimes very inconvenient for communication. One other clear benefit to use internet is the cost effectiveness, as it served us in many ways compared to its price. Therefore, it is for sure an excellent medium to communicate people worldwide.
On the other hand, it is often believed that the internet may not be a reliable option for information. For any kind of topic, there are tons of varied opinion, which sometimes create unnecessary confusion. For example, students often use internet as a reference to prepare their assignment, article or journal and end up with some error. Though there are lots of site where is reliable and accountable, it is always better to double check from relevant source and reference book as it will decrease the margin of error. In the long run, this habit can help individual and society from any form of scam of internet.
In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinion, I think that the internet has done an outstanding job as a means of communication to bring people together from different parts of world..
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 120, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... friends, family and relatives and what no and I agree with this side of discussio...
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Line 6, column 357, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun site seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of sites'.
Suggestion: lots of sites
...nd up with some error. Though there are lots of site where is reliable and accountable, it i...
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Line 8, column 192, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...e together from different parts of world..
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88202247191 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79975448452 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544943820225 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6442535496 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.625 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6875 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223627486185 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075592585561 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571056908084 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15096630355 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399429577095 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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