It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance, for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Some believe that those borned untalented can’t advance in their field of choice, while others think practice matters and being gifted doesn’t. What makes more sense to me, however, is that being gifted since birth is a good head start, yet the deciding factor is persistent practice.
It is true that people gifted with an outstanding brain can be successful in their field of choice far ahead of many. For example, Mozart was given a music-proning mind at birth, and he could perform compositions with little exposure to the piano. However, considering he is one rare example amongst the many musicians, it’s easy to see what success takes is other than just a blessed mind.
Those who are not gifted in their field of choice, although possibly experience discouragement at first, will go far as long as they are willing to practice. For instance, many athletes are born with normal physical capabilities, and they managed to achieve impressive body condition to compete with gifted athletes. Through appropriately guided practice, anyone can become experienced, knowledged, physically well-prepared, and successful, blessed at birth or not.
To sum up, being gifted is a great head start, but lots of practice decides whether or not a person becomes professional at sports, composing music, or professions with similar nature. It is my simple belief that there is hope for anyone, as long as they are willing to try.
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- Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside Other believe that there are health benefits to living in cities Discuss both views and give your own opinion 89
- Some people think that sense of competition should be encouraged in children However others consider cooperation more important to make them good adults Discuss both these views and give your opinion 67
- It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents for instance for sport or music and others are not However it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician 56
- Some people say free time activities for children should be organized by parents Others say that children should be free to choose what they do in their free time Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
- In the future all cars buses trucks will be driverless The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicle outweigh the disadvantages 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 77, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...ead start, but lots of practice decides whether or not a person becomes professional at sports...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1204.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16738197425 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81345448968 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652360515021 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.3148103015 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 120.4 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188992538039 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735426511498 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438197348804 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115402462949 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183187760662 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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