It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn the culture of other people. We can learn just as much from books, films and the internet . Do you agree or disagree?
It is true that we no longer need to come to different places to learn the way of life of others because we can learn the same things from books, films, and the internet. Personally, I am more inclined towards the former.
There are two main reasons why many individuals prefer to stay home and browsing the internet for information about the globe. One reason is that it is the easiest and cheapest way to gain more knowledge about what other people are doing in their own country. Take bloggers, for example, travellers went to various sites of the world and then when they came back home, they wrote a blog their observation, the norm, lifestyles and especially the cautions when coming to a country. Furthermore, books can give details with lots of data, pictures and descriptions about that region’s traditions, customs, civilization. Documentary movies are also of great help as most of them provide the audience with sound effects, allowing learners to hear the locals’ voices and languages.
Apart from the practical benefits expressed above, I believed that it is better for learners to pay a visit to the country whose culture they want to know more about. People cannot have realistic experiences if only staying home and reading reviews posted online. Instead, they should get directly exposed to the culture they are curious about so that they can have their own experiences and opinions without relying on others’ subjective judgements. Since the world is always changing the facts provided by books and movies might soon be out-of-date. Therefore, what was written or recorded a long time ago can hardly ensure its accuracy.
In conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above, I strongly believe that people need to travel around to learn better about the culture of somewhere rather than depending on the ample source of information from books, films and the internet.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 118, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...t people need to travel around to learn better about the culture of somewhere rather t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, then, therefore, apart from, for example, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0253968254 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62224143888 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615873015873 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0422406195 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.769230769 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2307692308 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243446103769 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720150191626 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864916252443 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163342898533 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766616505879 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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