It is often said that to become a successful businessman, a tertiary education is not all necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement. Give your opinion with relevant examples
Achieving success in business world could be determined by several factors, such as acquisition soft skills or interpersonal skills, perseverance, university degree to mention but a few. Some individuals believe that having university education does not entirely determine the degree of success in business. I completely agree with this opinion and this essay will elaborate important quality one need to possess to be a successful business tycoon.
There is no doubt that having a university degree boost one's chance of being successful in life. This is because many jobs out there require an individual, who had undergone rigorous training in the university and as such possess the capacity to do well in any organisation. However, this is not the same when it comes to being an outstanding business magnate. The founder and CEO of most popular social network, Facebook - Mark, is a good example. He dropped out of the university to pursue a career in technology world. Today, he is being regarded as one of the most prosperous businessmen in the world, despite the fact that he did not complete university education.
That being said, becoming a successful business personnel requires one to be acquainted with the nitty - gritty of business. People who tend to excel in entrepreneurship must possess soft skills and have perseverance in order to stand the taste of time when business is not booming as one would have expected. These qualities are not taught in universities, but are essentially needed to be outstanding in enterprises. For instance, Mr Edwin, who owed the biggest electronics shop in Lagos, recently said " for you to succeed in business, you must know how to communicate with customers, and also, be ready to stand strong when faced with challenges in your business". Thus, for one to do well in business, these qualities like interpersonal skulls and hard work are needed.
To conclude, having looked at the importance of tertiary education as it contributes to being successful in life, however, to succeed as a business person, there are also, other attributes such as soft skill and perseverance that one needs more than university degree.
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also, but, however, if, look, so, thus, well, for instance, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18413597734 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02561438263 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546742209632 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3607935366 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5333333333 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145572639005 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049761951542 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576309754228 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918716478337 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433882052838 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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