In the last 20 years there have been significant development in the field of information technology for ex the world wide web and communication by email. However, this developments in IT are likely to have more negative effects than positive in the future.
To what extent do you agree with this view ?
Beside the fact that Universe have been blessed in the last two decade by the tremendous evolution at information technological field, society believe that it would have adverse effect to the future of people who accompanied with its advancement. However, I accord with the later view which will be analyzed in the subsequent paragraph.
To commence, reflecting radiation from screen has destructive effect for humans as well for all species on the earth not only that it can cause numerous diseases such as obesity by its longer usage. Similarly, world wide web can allow youngers to search for anything which may lead toward redundant websites. To illustrate, addiction of porn websites and habit of its daily usage might ruin children’s future.
On the contrary, The umpteen advantages coordinated with the technology has proven its existence none the less than a boon for human being. To exemplify, Communicating via emails and chat from other social networking sites has assisted many professional activities and it has made working environment with more ease and comfort. However, the only way to keep continue working in this field by taking its benefits is that by providing its drawback for those who overuse it and restricting some sites which can lead someone to the negative path.
In conclusion, although technological advancement has been improving situation with its plethora of reward, Government or authorization should take steps to push limitation to its boundries in order to make younger’s future bright by protecting them being bleak in the coming years.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: nonetheless
...the technology has proven its existence none the less than a boon for human being. To exempli...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, similarly, so, well, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31746031746 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.884492119 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678571428571 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.5617705939 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.888888889 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194845125577 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696990109108 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607474760047 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106572999149 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463382035201 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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