Today main positions are prevalently by older members in many companies these days . Although some people think young people who illustrate better leadership, it is in my opinion that senior managers have got more advantages over the young in leading a company .
To begin with, senior managers have more knowledge and experience than young people.Those days people who have adequate experience can more effectively monitor to lead the members of a company than who do not .For instance business matters require people in charge to have not only knowledge but also nerves to find flexible solutions for problematic situations .
Another advantage belonging to old people is that they are have got more support from members of organisation .A leader is a person who can influence the behaviour of other people, take responsibility, consistently go to achieve specific goals and lead a team but young people don't inspire confidence so that they can not be leader .
In conclusion , leader should be given for older people in order to younger people need to be supported by senior managers
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 176.0 315.596192385 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19886363636 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82253941201 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607954545455 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.790779765 49.4020404114 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 183.0 106.682146367 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.2 20.7667163134 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.2 7.06120827912 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220569520758 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128459828555 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796369963093 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151184393435 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727350210728 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 13.0946893788 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.49 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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