Learning English at school is often seen as more important thn learning local languages.if these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out.

Essay topics:

Learning English at school is often seen as more important thn learning local languages.if these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out.

There are over 6500 spoken languages in the world and some of them are dying out.Among all the languages, english language is considered as a global language and is every school, it has been noted that, the emphasis particularly on english language is far more unexceptional in today's world. However, the gloomy prognosis about the local languages anticipate the demise of these locally spoken languages.
The language of a nation reflects a lot about it's culture and it's people. Also, a language of a culture, sometimes, it is believed to be spoken by the beloved God of that culture and it is very important for them ti preserve it's moral values. Hence, in order to obviate the extinction of these native languages, it is necessary to implement regulations regarding languages.
As the modern culture has evolved, the well known 'english' language has evaded the whole world.The dominance of this modern language is evident in every fields weather it is an educational institute or a corporate office. Eventually, it has become a demand in every aspects for the acquisition of the knowledge about this language .

Nevertheless,the fading out of native languages can not be disregarded and prompt actions must be taken. To avoid the dying out of community languages,these languages should be added in the academics of the pupils, together with the emergence and history of the languages. Moreover, the encouragement to preserve these languages should be undertaken by campaigns organised by local communities.
To sum up the discussion, it can be asserted that the local languages holds the history of our ancestors and flouting the destruction of them would not be wise.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, well, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16176470588 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01760367164 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5705762025 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.636363636 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125073014076 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549643086792 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463503201669 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0703888657329 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512765623871 0.056905535591 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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