Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Accommodating in a territory in which the spoken language is quite different from the learnt mother tongue seems to prompt a myriad of issues in terms of social arena and also practical aspect. I personally do agree to this contemplation to a great extent since such circumstance would lead to misunderstanding and inappropriate communication and socializing. This essay will elaborate on these two problems.
To begin with, speaking in a foreign language can cause misunderstanding as proper words are not depicted. To be more precise, this tangible and sensible challenge happens due to fragile infrastructures and devastating educational atmosphere in which important grammar and range of vocabulary are not taught. Consequently, people being brought up in such societies will not be able to bloom if the proper fundamentals are not provided. A transparent example could be countries in conflicts where for example English is not taught in schools and teachers do insist on ameliorating mother tongue subsequently when the war is over and such regions have to live a life under new regulations like speaking In English, constituents are not able to depict correct words leading to misunderstanding and its peripheral issues. Therefore, misunderstanding is a common issue getting triggered when the infrastructures are not founded accurately
Moreover, human's lives significantly depend on socializing and interactions. These two both rely on language. Although starting communication can happen based on other tools, language is presumed to be the most prominent one making life easier and also paving the way just to bloom in life. It is just a necessity without which further problems get triggered and additionally it can cause health issues such as depression and isolation. For instance, just envisage a person who can not communicate with other denizens around because of lack of knowledge in speaking in their language. Under these circumstances this person starts to get isolated and he avoids participating in social atmospheres and finally it can cause depression that hardly ever could it get cured easily. To sum up, communication and starting to join other groups of people are essential in terms of lifting the spirit and also avoiding other mental issues to start.
All in all, acquiring proper language to speak with in every spot seems necessary. Despite other feasible means of communication, language is a cornerstone of any society that people living there should learn it as wonderful as possible. Otherwise, it prompts misunderstanding and lack of socializing which the latter one could even cause isolation and other mental - related issues. From my perspective further life achievements seriously depend on language and I agree with this opinion to a great extent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with, to sum up, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2361.0 1615.20841683 146% => OK
No of words: 437.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40274599542 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24699356367 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54233409611 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 745.2 506.74238477 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.54443083 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.166666667 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2777777778 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61111111111 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221472903922 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659356720814 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514135817961 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132829603512 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245851298296 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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