Longer life spans and improvements in the health of older people suggest that people over the age of sixty-five can continue to live full and active lives. In what ways can society benefit from the contribution that older people can make? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Comparing to the past when the maximum age of a man is just merely sixty five, nowadays, human beings’ quality of life is increasingly improved with a rapid rate due to the advancements of up-to-minute technology and healthcare. As a result, average longevity of man today has become longer and longer than years ago, human kind in modern pace of life can continue to live full and active lives, which completely has a positive impact on the contemporary society.
On the one hand, the older generations help to maintain the precious traditions as well as customs in our rush life. It is extremely glad to see the harmony between two generations sharing cultural traditional values such as conventional songs, games, fairy tales, so on and so forth. Were it not for the elders, the young would not be able to truly understand and gain those treasured experience themselves.
On the other hand, the findings, the inventions and the studies made by the elder has brought about undeniable benefits for our daily life. However, in fact, all of these things undoubtedly required a lot of time and effort, which can only be fulfilled by the elder. To put it differently, the older people get, the wiser they are and the more experience they have. And it is obvious that just only the aged can be suitable candidates to devote enough time, knowledge and experience that any young man hardly manage to do.
To sum up, the older generation have provided plenty of advantages for present community.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89411764706 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75896776244 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635294117647 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.208816621 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.8 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229764728878 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722598508878 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465009722582 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112592604077 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570583066749 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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