As major cities in the world are growing today, so do their problems. What are problems for young people who are living in the cities as the result of continued growth? What are solutions for these problems?
It is true that big cities, at present, have experienced the constantly significant growth, which poses several issues to the young. These problems should be adopted with a number of viable measures.
Regarding city's growth, two main matters can be anticipated. First of all, the most serious consequence is financial pressure. It is indisputable that major cities have to face the development in both economy and population, which makes the living cost be more and more expensive, as a result, requires the young to be economical without fail and spend most of their time on earning a living. While it normally costs ten thousand Vietnam dong to buy a loaf of bread for the breakfast, this figure can be doubled or tripled in the center of Ho Chi Minh City. Further, the threat of unemployment is also rose to young inhabitants, especially fresh graduate students. Despite the extremely huge demand for annually recruitment in major cities, the requirements accompanied are high as well, which leads to a harshly competitive rate.
In order to resolve, we must first address its root causes. At the heart of the matter is the expensive living standard. More universities should be relocated to the suburbs of big cities with an aim to reduce the demand for housing, foods and so on, which eases living costs. One further method would be for the recruiters and schools to hold more career workshops as well as job fairs so that university students have opportunities to improve their skills, experience and find it more accessible to seek future jobs.
In reality, this is an issue of such complexity that no solution is likely in the short term. Nevertheless, it is my belief that the above-mentioned measures would constitute a good first step of the current matters resulted from the continuously developing cities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'risen'.
Suggestion: risen
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, well, while, as a result, as well as, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0198019802 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86436326141 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627062706271 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.640175602 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.642857143 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197732641298 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559951312531 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040257841555 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103259406503 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326075364175 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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