Many countries aim to improve their living standard by economic development, but some important social values are lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages?
Most of the nations, around the globe, predominantly pay attention on betterment of life-style of the nationals by financial growth. However, it is believed by some that giving too much importance to financial prosperity ultimately leads to the loss of some essential traditional values of the country. In my opinion, I consider that good economic expansion brings immense benefits for a nation compared to any problems it might bring.
Despite the some minor drawbacks below, I believe that economically developed countries provide tremendously great standard of life to its nationals. First of all, high quality of health and education services offered by financially sound nations that enhance quality of living. For example, every year, in the uk, government invest a considerable amount of fund on national health services to provide free basic healthcare facilities to keep people mentally and physically healthy. Along with this, high standard of education is provided by the government of the uk and it is utterly free of cost up-to A level. Furthermore, in the financially sound countries, career services provided to people are at exponentially high level to support in their placements at various positions in the national or multinational industries. For instance, in many developed countries, government provides free career counseling to aid people for a better job oppourtunities by providing various career oriented training programmes. Moreover, economically strong nation invest a huge amount to bring financial equality and to support specifically homeless, jobless, lower income household and elderly people by granting monthly payment eventually help them to lead better quality of life.
Admittedly, there are some issues involved when people of the nation mainly concentrate on household economy rather than their social values. One problem is that people could misuse the services offered by government. In other words, sometimes, people show themselves unemployed to get benefits provided by government authorities and these awful illegal acts could promote laziness and materialistic life- style among people and put extra strain on national fund. Another negative aspect is that it could be a reason of surge in the crime level at national or international level. To illustrate, when both parents got busy in their jobs and overlooked the importance of family then it could be possible that their children get involved in anti-social activities such as, drug dealing, knife crime, kiddnapping etc. But, these concerns are rare in developed countries as they have their strict low and legislations to mitigate these crimes level.
To conclude, economic developed countries offered extremely high standard of facilities like, better healthcare, education, career services bring lots of benefits to the nationals and clearly outweigh any disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2456.0 1615.20841683 152% => OK
No of words: 436.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63302752294 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99208829655 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564220183486 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 777.6 506.74238477 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.6004773149 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.470588235 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6470588235 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41176470588 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160549419906 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543296814478 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602526200092 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110572498222 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335136567289 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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