In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent. Why do you think this is and what can be done about it?
As a consequence of the imbalance in the society’s development, criminal issues has increasingly sparked much more harsh debate. More than that, in recent years, crimes have gradually had the sign of violence that cause severe outcomes to the life of the whole society. In this essay, the root of criminal issues and solutions for them will be discussed thoroughly.
Admittedly, crime usually arises from lack of education, a poor life and oppression caused by the inequality of society. Obviously, there is no one born with the desire for becoming a criminal of society but bearing all the disadvantageous aspects of society for a long time may force them to change their moral behaviors and socially improper attitudes into the negative ones. Actually, no one can make decision about where they were born. The majority’s view of evaluating the poor as a burden of the whole society has indirectly compelled them to steal the property of other people. Regarding the level of education, most criminals are primarily those who does not have enough conditions for pursuing their study. As result, their dropping out of school can reduce the chance of getting an appropriate job in the future. Recent years have seen much more fatally severe crimes. The main reason for the violent character of crimes lies in the fact that the increase in smuggling through boundaries of the country and the abuse of power of the authorities have made an suitable environment for criminals to being more armed and despise the severity of the national laws.
To overcome those above-mentioned causes, I am of the opinion that the first compulsory thing is to reshape the attitude of people towards an equally civilized society where each individual have the right to be respected. In addition, the authorities should plan some strategies to raise more funds for supporting the poor in having access to a better education and a good living condition.
As regards the role of government, the laws should impose more deterrent charges to power-abusing leaders so as to keep the equality and transparency of the society.
To sum up, although criminal issues and the violence of crime has never been an easy issue for seeking a radical solution, but the commitment of people for building a comprehensively developing society will be the most efficient weapon for getting rid of the crime’s root.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, may, regarding, so, as regards, as to, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1990.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06361323155 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83490937199 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572519083969 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 643.5 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.5078719009 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.666666667 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168735233926 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539444713574 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392272560973 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854654994801 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478279970442 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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