In many countries, schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggestions?
These days, students at school have acute behavior problems, such as school violence and truancy. At the same time, however, there is some uncertainty as to the causes of this problem, and how it might be resolved. In this essay I will examine the issue and seek some possible solutions.
To begin with, in regard to reasons, it is undeniable that abundant violent information in mass media leads to the fact that students become aggressive at school. For instance, students can access various brutal information on TV and imitate what they have seen at school because they lack the ability to tell right from wrong and are more vulnerable to bad influences. In addition, test-oriented education causes students to feel bored in class and play truant from school. A good case in point is that high schools in most Asian countries, where successful students are measured only by their mid-term or final examination grades, focus on the teaching method to improve pupils’ performances in exams and ignore what they are interested in.
On the other hand, as to solutions, the government ought to draw up and enact harsh laws to reduce the amount of violence in the media, and with much less exposure to it, students can be friendly to each other at school. Furthermore, the government should encourage the schools to convert their current educational system into the learner-oriented one, and with interest guidance students are more willing to stay at school to learn.
To summarize, there is no doubt that the reasons for the students’ bad behavior at school are inappropriate schooling and violent contents in abundance on media. At the same time, however, there are two efficient fashions to solve these two issues.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, so, as to, for instance, in addition, no doubt, such as, in regard to, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06293706294 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79095455998 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.569366465 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.636363636 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3636363636 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233456367304 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885499504099 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402981798582 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137099140727 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451010792756 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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