In many countries women are allowed to take maternity leave from their jobs during the first month after the birth of their baby. Does advantage outweigh disadvantages?
It is quite common in many countries that women could have a one-month leave after the birth of their baby. In present essay, I shall discuss both the advantages and disadvantages before giving my comparative conclusion.
The merits for this trend may involve the recognition that mothers, who gave a birth, could recovery from weak state as soon as possible during this leaving month followed by being more productive and energetic on their work as well as becoming more loyal to their company. On the other hand, it also bring benefit ti society development in the long run, as women would like to have children promoted by such policy, which can rise the rate of birth for the country alleviating the problem, or giving Japan as an example which country now has heavy finance burdens caused by low birth rate.
However, there are certainly disadvantages in terms of the employers' perspective. They may face the situation that many female employees ask for leaving in maternity reason, leading to low efficiency and other negative effects. For instance, others need to work on the occupations temporarily but they do not know how to operate things they are not familiar with. But overall, I think this is less likely in fact, while the holiday is only one month and conversely many mother would shorten this leave period in order to earn their living.
To conclude, I think the aforementioned demerit is not the issue compared with the considerable workers' loyalty and motivation together with the long term benefit for society increasing the birth rate.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: brings
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Suggestion: many mothers
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'workers'' or 'worker's'?
Suggestion: workers'; worker's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, however, may, so, well, while, for instance, i think, in fact, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00766283525 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61842006987 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632183908046 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.5281453174 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.222222222 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7777777778 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278296464963 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109541161727 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112489504129 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165859827997 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112793200207 0.056905535591 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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