Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
The museum is important building for historical item preservation.Nowadays some historical building charges entry fees when others are free.In my opinion,building must be charging some amount of money from visitor because this money used to build renovation.
Firstly,museum need fund for his maintenance activity like cleaning purcheing new historical iteams so if gallery charge some money from visitor it is help to gallery.for instance, junagath library charge 50rs from local people and 100 from foreain vistor and 500 for camera this all currency used to maintain library and pay staff member who work there.if library is not took some amount of money they should not maintain bulding expance as a result one day museum are close.In addition bulding bug monery from government and obey to some external funding.
However, if foundation are start fee on visiting the gallery it cause low visitors are coming for watching historical items. For example, in Surat city historical bulding are convert in to ghost place because of lack of visitor activity and due to this bulding lost his prestiges value in globaly.
In nutshell, museum charge some amount of fee for his mainatinace whereas the charge should be effortable for all types of peoples.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 200.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86003059424 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 161.506160873 49.4020404114 327% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 212.4 106.682146367 199% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.0 20.7667163134 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 21.6 7.06120827912 306% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231492825492 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135850473445 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806382573534 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161178884823 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707386554969 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.6 13.0946893788 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.42 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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