MANY MUSEUMS CHARGE FOR ADMISSION WHILE OTHERS ARE FREE.
DO YOU THINK THE ADVANTAGES OF CHARGING FEES OUTWEIGH THE DISADVANTAGES.
in this modern era, Museum is the place, where individuals can see and enjoy the things of past also get the cognizance of the history. Many if the museums take an entry fee, however, others are free of charge. In this essay, I think the merits of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the demerits.
To embark with, there are humongous advantages of taking charge of entry. Museums are run by the government while some by the private foundations. So, admission fee helps to authors economically - it not only increases the income but also helpful for museums' workers. For an example, charge of enrollment helps to pay the salary to employees - who are working in gallery, which assists them to fulfill their needs and rises the income.
Moreover, the Museum entry fee is working as a source of income and this collected money helps to incure the expenses of the museum. For an instance, due to some natural disasters, if the building damage at that time collected fees very helpful to renovate the museum in addition if museums are run by NGO they can help the citizens in some worst situations. For an example, the well-known museum of Rajasthan - Jaisalmer war museum allocates some amount of fund for people, during coronavirus pandemic when government apply lock down in country.
To recapitulate, it is sine-qua-non to take an admission fee because it gains financial support and assists in many ways : incure expences; rises economy; seurity; electricity and so on.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98393574297 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68422228773 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590361445783 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2816858696 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.818181818 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6363636364 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326434544278 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13210579712 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819702333372 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193621778748 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918047964253 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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