Many museums charge for admission while others are free.
Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Write atleast 250 words.
Charging the people to visit inside a museum sounds intimidating, but it has it's own positivities. I think that the advantages of charging rather than cost-free admission adds more sense and the importance it makes is discussed below.
To embark on, maintenance of a museum is inevitable as that is what mainly increases visits. For proper maintenance, the amount obtained from people through entrance tickets will be helpful. And, workers, who maintain a museum, should be paid well enough for good result.
To drive this, improving museum standard also necessitates more money. Improving buildings or any kind of renovation work is important as museums normally flow with people. Damages to any existing exhibits in museum or improvement in security or any kind of services can be well done with such extra obtained amount. Further, to improve the standard and increase the number of rare pieces or artifacts in museum, it can aid.
As museums fix their own prices for admission, far high rates and unreasonable costs can be difficult for poorer community people to afford. But, mean prices can help so that it won't be a great disadvantage.
I might support entry-free museums that will be government-aided. But, my own compelling life experience made me accept small mean fares on tickets even if it's government supported. A visit to an old government officials uses weapons museum in India, which was free of cost for entry, was not well maintained and the condition of the exhibits were in such a poor state irrespective of their importance. On the other hand, a mean priced entry fee for an old native books museum in same area was of completely opposite positive trend and had many visitors. It was well maintained even when books are arduous to maintain than weapons usually.
To conclude, the entry fees are indispensable to keep a museum clean, maintained and attractive tourist spot. A mean fixed and reasonable price would do the job, gain the name as frequently visited place for locals and keep the standards of the museum better than free entry.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, i think, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03488372093 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81183852867 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595930232558 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8098005314 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2222222222 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286269482939 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866031097051 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537089031385 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149288573601 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403202923913 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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