Many museums charge for admission while others are free.
Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
It is true that visitors need to defray tickets for entering some museums. Such this phenomenon has some demerits and I support the view that it is likely to have positive effects on not only these very museums but also the society.
A number of disadvantages have been associated with expenditure for the museum’s admission. It would circumscribe the number of visitors going to museum. For example, museum in many places does not have ability to attract people, especially the young ones because it is not a center which can serve mostly their amusements so entrance fees would be the second barrier stagnates the number of people tending to go. Supposedly, the museum does not achieve the number of visitors which was planned by administrations so that the cost of maintaining ancient sculptures or exploring new historic discoveries would eclipse the revenue from selling tickets, museum, therefore, would be closed.
Notwithstanding, I would argue that the merits of charging for entering museums overshadow the foregoing disadvantages. Firstly, the administrations of these museums will have enough money to extend the boundary by exhibiting manifold kinds of art, not only historic documents and ancient items. The more people enjoy the event they organize, the more sponsor or private companies would be attracted to invest in the museum. At the same time, entrance fee can contribute to the education in beneficial ways which the visitor would have good awareness and respect for historic items for the reason that people tend to be made more aware of elements, namely goods and services, they spent on.
In conclusion, I would reiterate that paying for tickets to entrance museums, despite their drawbacks is advantageous to the museum and also to educate residents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24825174825 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88056082925 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573426573427 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.3628369074 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.454545455 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206864772777 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918168545799 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457071359306 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127272580398 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317826664012 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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