Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening ? what are the solutions ?
It is obvious from looking at the figures by law enforcement agencies that only punishment is not the solution of crimes executed by criminals. This essay would analyze & discuss about the possible reasons as well as solutions of this re-occurring problem.
The first and worst reason is lack of quality education and poverty. To prove my point, wrongdoers are unknown about their moral & social responsibility towards society. They have no compassion, kindness & feeling while doing heinous crimes such as rape, kidnapping,human-trafficking and murder. Another concerning point is lackluster and indifferent attitude of the masses towards culprits. For instance, when the guilty comes out of the prison, people do not care about them, what to talk about giving them respect & dignity. As a result, they feel isolated, deserted and depressed. They want company as well as job so that they can live respectful life. When they face harsh and unfavorable circumstances, they become easy target of terrorists, money launderers, drug-smugglers and other anti-social groups. Moreover, Hand in glove with politicians and insatiable desire for wealth & power also incite them to commit crimes in no time as they are not afraid of law and legislation and become frequent prisoners.
The best way out is to provide moral education and organize job-oriented work-shops so that one can understand each-other very well, be humane and sympathetic . Plus, if they have any sort of skill, it would enable them to eke out their living as well as stress-free. For example, several kind of programs should be held by the governments of a particular country to improve the lives of the prisoners and to retrieve them in the mainstream. Another remedy to combat this problem is to have fool-proof system and its impartial execution. It is very common to see criminals to get off Scot-free in my country ( India ) because they do not have any fear of being caught and put behind bars. To justify, a recent study concluded that more than 30 percent Indian legislators are either directly involved in crimes or tainted somehow. Therefore, nexus between criminals and politicians needs immediately to be eradicated. The earlier it is possible, the better it is.
In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that social,emotional and economic support to petty offenders and enactment of stringent and unbiased rules for savage culprits could be very effective and panacea.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, sort of, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2057.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27435897436 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12759126317 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625641025641 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 638.1 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4122449331 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.85 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.65 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0956588541963 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0255774452152 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333584153937 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0631791777376 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430289745702 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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